Apology for Rebecca's stolen Cookie + A fair well

Title says it all. Short, sweet and simple like a cookie.

Dear Rebecca,

I am very sorry for stealing your cookie that day in snack. I was hungry and lazy, so I didn't want to make the cafeteria line for food. And there's the fact that it was just sitting right there!! I hope you can forgive me for stealing your beloved cookie whom which you wanted to eat really badly.

I hope you have fun at Florida! remember your promise and have a safe flight! I will miss you!

-Sue 

Author's Note

yeah...I know. pretty pathetic. excusing yourself for a frikin' cookie. well, rebecca was pretty devastated when she found out her cookie wasn't there. (I didn't tell her I ate it).

Reviews

[Skin]

Not important but . . .
your beloved cookie whom which you wanted

It should be 'whom'
or
it should be 'which'

not whom which

[Melodious Scheme]

Cute :3

[Love Is Dead]

haha! this was funny and very cute!

"I was hungry and lazy, so I didn't want to make the cafeteria line for food. And there's the fact that it was just sitting right there!!!" funniest line eva!

[Liz-z]

Aw, what an adorable story! I love it, so funny too! Well written and honest! Love it! :)
Favorite Lines (even though it isn't a poem i still can have these)
"I was hungry and lazy, so I didn't want to make the cafeteria line for food"
haha, favorite part, isn't that always the excuse? XD

[Claudia]

hahhaha XD

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Haha thats funny!!! but, seriously, if there's a cookie somewhere, you're free to take it. there are NO rules saying you cant, even if it's your friends :)

[WayOath]

Ha ha ha, is there actually truth to this cookie stealing story...lol I like your pen name, it's funny. By the way, this was very humurous. I loved it.

[Adela Muresan]

:)) That was real kowel :), man I loved it.
It's the kind of thing that puts you out of a bad mood. I wasn't expecting to find it on the profile of a guy that likes the name,, Death's Expulsion,, , glad it happened.

A.M.

[CLUTZ]

Me and my friends still each other's food all the time, we even got into a argument over bacon.... pathetic I know but it was funny afterwards. hope your friend gets another cookie.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

All is fair in love and cookies. A watched cookie never gets eaten. Once bitten twice eaten.