friends

friends

A Poem by eddie

please just listen to the words i have to say

friends are rare to find

so keep the ones you have close behind

if you dont believe me ask for yourself

they will tell you that they are your help

just watch them close and understand

they arent perfect,but neither are you

so just stay true

© 2008 eddie


Author's Note

eddie
be honest and speak your mind about it

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once again, you are a positive spirit

friends true friends will last a lifetime
I agree with the message
maybe try to expand on the piece
nice message either way
thank you for entering my contest

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very short and simple piece, yet very much interesting and deep in its own way..
An awesome read..
Lovely piece indeed ! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


A nice poetic idea. It's nicely put together and could be even better with a little more - I think you write well. Best wishes, Pammy.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2008

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eddie
eddie

barberton, OH



About
im not the greatest writer... but i want homest opinions of what you think more..

Writing
L.O.V.E. L.O.V.E.

A Poem by eddie



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