Untitled II

Untitled II

A Poem by His

coming going
always flowing
Never ending
Feelings ascending
Heart accelerates
INsecurity waits
Coming near
Sudden fear
Love life
Sharp knife
Sudden pain
Healing rain

© 2016 His


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His
idk where i was going with this XD

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Most times I just think I'm rhyming words and have no idea of what I'm writing, but in the end, it all fits together like a puzzle and the image I've been painting is revealed. This poem has meaning to it, the end made it clear "sharp knife sudden pain..."

Posted 8 Years Ago


It all seems to make sense despite the fact that you didn't know where you were going with it. Great rhyming too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


His

8 Years Ago

thanks ^_^

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Added on August 20, 2016
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My names Ruby and I have two babies named Willow (she has four paws and purrs lol) and Princess (she also has four paws and she's learning to bark). I quit writing for a while and I'm starting up agai.. more..

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