Look up

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Dark blue

Sky, In Heavenly

It calls out to me

Slowly heavily voice

It sings

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Author's Note

Pretty bad I know

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[ThisLullaby]

Sky, In Heavenly

Heavenly is an adjective, you are describing nothing after the word. To improve your poem, you may want to make it flow better too. I want to help. Hmm, if this were my poem, what would I do?

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Dark blue
Sky, contrast so heavenly
It calls out to me
Slowly, I hear it
A heavy, voice of majesty
It sings
Look up,
Look up,
But my eyes lock to the ground.


That would be about me, but I am defiant