I loved

Its about a friend

She was sitting at home

She was all alone

When her Boyfriend got home

All covered in lipstick form head to toe

He kissed her and told her that at his was at work

when this lady got up and attacked him

She didn't belive him

Then she packed up her bags

As she head towards the door

He begged her not to go

 

 

Author's Note

This is the only way I could say it

Reviews

[E. A. Fielder]

oh I like this! there were a few grammatical errors but I really liked this! I think its your best one! Its short and too the point. I like it. It's like a friend's point of view of "call me when you're sober." Love it! Keep writing! I can't wait to see what you write next