Untitled

I've been putting a lot of writing out there that is Untitled. Please bare with me. I'll be coming up with titles as soon as possible :)

You snatched me.

Trapped me in.

With your fancy cars,

And flashy charm.

Until I had given it all to you.

You see,

I was young.

I never knew what was best for me.

I had thought this was love

Now that bits and pieces of me are with you.

I wish I hadn't given it up to you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life lessons cannot be stopped. Old Grandpa told me once. If too good to be true. Not true. Your words powerful and understandable. Thank you Marissa for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Jade]

such an emotional read, but nicely expressed

[Marissa Torres]

thank you :)