Happily ever after

I love you

It's been short,

so brief,

almost as if we were strangers

thrown together,

forced to get along.

 

I want you to be my safety

my security

my love

I want you to love me for me.

Accept me for who I am,

my faults and all the bad decisions Ive made.

 

I want you to know everything Ive done

and still love and treat me the same as if you hadnt known. 

I want you to lean on me

I want you to know you can always count me.

 

There's always that chance

that things dont work out the way

we plan.

Maybe Im wasting my time on you.

Maybe this is all some cruel joke

someone is playing to get even.

 

Maybe its fate,

maybe its a second chance.

Maybe its false hope,

maybe its pretend.

 

Sometimes it feels too good to be true,

Someone like me, doesnt deserve someone

as good as you.

You are better than my dreams could ever create.

I dont know what I did right to get you,

This is the happiest Ive ever been.

I think you and me have a real chance at making it through.

 

I want you to be my happily ever after.

Reviews

[Inci 2]

nice poem!!
well written .......only one thing i felt that it should be maybe its pretense

[EMMIE]

SWEET VERY VERY SWEET. LOL I WISH SOMEBODY WOULD SAY THAT TO ME.

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Beautiful

[WhiteWillow]

Desire, self-doubt, hope...love can make a person crazy! You relayed every emotion wonderfully. Nice piece.

[Dreamer<3]

Awww. I love this. Like a lot. You wrote it perfectly.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. All we can do is hope and have good luck. I like the desire and wish of this poem. I tell people. Don't be negative.Bad words and actions can turn love into sadness. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

This was really perfect i loved this and i hope that we find this someone
i love this stanza mostly :
"I want you to be my safety
my security
my love
I want you to love me for me.
Accept me for who I am,
my faults and all the bad decisions Ive made"

[Meghan]

You just said everything you were feeling in the simplest way and it worked. Well done.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent poem, thoughtful and deep...nice one!!