Stranger

Stranger

A Poem by watch_the_world

Ive always had a purpose,

Ive always known what that purpose was.

Always followed its odd twists and turns.

Always obeyed its every command.

You were my purpose.

And now that youre gone,

 

I feel like a stranger in my own life.

© 2011 watch_the_world


Author's Note

watch_the_world
Random thing I just kinda came up with... Im thinking about adding more at a later date... what do you think?

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Excellent! I liked it :) The last line was my favorite as well. Keep up the great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this is perfect as it is. I love the last line. I can relate to it. I feel like a stranger in my own life too. The whole poem was emotional, but good. I like this write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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