I feel like a shadow on the wall

I feel like Im falling to pieces.

I feel like Im falling to bits at someones feet.

I feel like Im falling and no one can stop me.

I feel like an outsider to my own life.

 

I feel insignificant.

I feel like im just a shadow on the wall.

I feel like I dont have a home.

I feel like I dont belong.

I feel like I mean nothing.

 

I feel like I should cry

I feel like I should scream

I feel like nobody cares anymore

I feel hopeless

 

I feel nameless

I feel confused

 

I feel lost.

Author's Note

kinda just a random thing I came up with... Im kinda in breakdownmood rightnow.

Reviews

[Nate E. Flake (Cösmic ..]

...but at the end it is just a feeling.

[李[A]]

I always thought anaphora style poems were quite interesting. The thing about a poem of extensive use of rhetoric is that I feel like it can be combined with other rhetorical poetry to create a poetic speech, or a shell can be made. Both ways, I feel like poems like this can be incorporated into the stories themself.

I feel that you conveyed the shadow well: hidden, unforseen, nobody, etc. All these thingsnyou write about are universal! Thanks for sharing :)

[gymnasticsgirl-101]

Wow! I like it! Thanks for sharing! :)