You are everything to me <3

This is a poem from the amazing Delaney :) Thought I would share with you all. Shes 13. I think its absolutely amazing.

I can't believe I let you into my 

life. 

 

From the moment we met

I thought you were the one

but I only found

that you didn't want to

hurt

me,

yet we ended things.

 

Your hands,

I will never forget the way they felt

everytime they

 hooked

with mine.

 

Your wonderful blue eyes

that

sparkle

everytime

we are together.

 

The way you made me feel,

was a feeling

indescribable

You and I,

glad we're still friends.

maybe someday we'll get back together.

Even though I know deep down 

it won't happen

but its worth

imagining

because

 

 

you are everything to me.

Author's Note

Formatting done by me. But the words were all Delaney :) Tell me whatcha think of her :)

Reviews

[Dreamer<3]

I realy like this! It's so sweet. She's good!

[Short.Nerd]

I like the formatting:) I think she has talent. Excellent poem :)

[Akshat♥]

Its really nice..i feel sad after reading it..
same happens with me...don't know why..
life has these things..we can't handle it..
poem is moving and sad..you must try to create your own
account and write in it..and add me..thanks for sharing it:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the emotion and the way you set-up the poem. I like the positive ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great poem, love the poem, the emotions and the formatting too. Wonderful :)

[souldude]

This is an amazing poem, and i'm glad to read that my cousin wrote it. It must run in the family. :D