It shouldn't have been you

It shouldn't have been you

A Poem by watch_the_world

I don't understand

what happened to you,

what happened to me,

what happened to us.

 

Perfect,

that's what we were

that's what we can never be again.

I know it scares you,

you know its the truth

just as well as I do.

 

Potential,

that's what we both know we had.

That's what saddens me until numb.

 

I gave up,

on you,

on us,

on everything,

even myself.

Wasted,

wasted the best thing

that had ever happened to me.

 

There is nothing I wouldnt do to have you back.

To be held in your arms again

like we used to

even if it was only for a moment.

 

I cant believe you were the one that got away...

 

It shouldnt have been you.

© 2011 watch_the_world


Author's Note

watch_the_world
Comment :) Merci :)

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Very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think everyone has a story of the one who got away. Good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the way you set-up the poem. Each paragraph assisted by the single word. Life allow us to look back and wish for a different ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful. gorgeous. endearing. truthful. it elequently describes a feeling commonly felt. a blue rose if you will. its so amazing. brava my love brava. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad, but i love how you wrote it all out!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write, Very sad.

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago



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