On the road that leads no where

If I were incased in ice 
I would become numb 
Feeling nothing in my heart. 
I would feel nothing in my soul. 

I would forever be incased 
In cold ice, 
No one could hurt me. 

No words, actions or feelings 
Can melt this ice 
That has been built up in my soul. 

This ice that has insulated my heart has turned me blue
Cold and emotionless. 

I have turned closed off from society. 
I have become irrational 
Understanding nothing but hurt in my path on this road that leads no where. 

I am incased in ice. 

Author's Note

Written in iPod xD honest opinion please xD

Reviews

[Michaela Briggeman]

love it mandaa!!!

[Sweets]

Great use of metaphor!
This is wonderful :)
Great job!

[TBird J.]

Your point is very clear.
The emotions are also very clear.
This is a strong piece.

[Liza]

ice Queen for sure ~ frozen....

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interesting analogy..the idea of ice numbing your heart..turning you cold to feelings..really nicely done

Whoa . . .
Amazing.
Simply, utterly amazing.
Deep and full of mystery.
I like it.

[Jami Nicole]

Panda, this is amazing.

[pamzilla. &hear..]

That block of ice shall be broken one day.
Somebody's gotta have an ice pick somewhere.
I loved this poem despite it's obvious pain, hurt and sadness.
I'm so sorry that you feel this way,
And I sincerly hope that you feel better.
And soon.