When you finally realize

When you finally realize

A Poem by watch_the_world

When you finally find another girl,
and you realize shes not me...
Don't come back.

When you understand girls have feelings,
Come apologize, except Ive already
forgiven you.

When you realize internet girls are fake
and you want something real,
the door will be slammed in your face.

When you understand what love is,
I hope you really commit.
You really sucked with that.

When you finally realize that I'm not coming back,
I hope you find someone who makes you feel what
you say I did.

When you finally realize you're still in love with me,
understand that I'm not taking you back.

I hope you are empty.
I hope you are helpless.
I hope you are learning from all this.

© 2011 watch_the_world


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I hear ya....love you manda! i find this piece to be strong and powerful with deep meaning, obviously, im goin on one of my rants but you know what? This is FRICKIN AMAZING!

Posted 13 Years Ago


You tell him! I enjoy the strong passion and power you have in this piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i have felt this way and when i finally realized he left for an illusion of greener grass - i was sitting peacefully without his torment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I think you still have feelings for this person...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it hun!....keep up the amazing writing. Love ya :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I absolutely love it!! It flowed nicely in my opinion and everything seemed true. Amazing job! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 18, 2011
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