Walking Distaster

really bored... thought Id come up with something. Random Kinda. :)

Breath after breath
Nothing has changed.

Sentence after sentence
Still doesn't help.

Word after word
They still don't mean a thing.

Score after score
I still don't make you proud.

Lie after lie
I believe its the truth.

Bite after bite
Nothing ever stays down.

Cry after cry
No help ever is sent.

Song after song
No emotion.

Fight after fight
I feel you leaving,
Don't go Bro,
I need you.

Threat after threat
and I still haven't left.

Problem after problem
never gets resolved.

Day after day
things still stay the same.

Author's Note

Title is a little shaky it just happens to be the song Im listening to

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Really good! You did a great job writing this:)

[Dreamer<3]

This is good good good great!

[josh B]

sis.. im never gonna go anywhere ... im sorry if i mad u sad/mad :( forgive me.
and i like this :) its good

[Jami Nicole]

This is really good, but you need a wayyyyyyyyy better title because it just doesn't work with the poem. But otherwise it's awesome. :)

[AchingAlexandra]

that was very nice.
I loved it. a lot.