I'm alone in this house I call my home

I'm alone in this house I call my home

A Poem by watch_the_world
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Written on iPod

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I feel alone
I feel empty
I feel unaccepted
I feel unworthy
I feel worthless

I am uncared for
And unloved.
A select few of the
Population cares.
And I mean a few like three

I'm so alone
In this house I call my own.
And not because there is no one
Here there are plenty.
No one cares.

I dont even get a "hi how are you"
Text from anyone anymore.
No one bothers to ask.

Why can't anyone see I'm not
Happy? And how come when
The love of my life asks me
"whats the matter love?"
I always reply with, "nothing"
When all I want to say is "No one cares"
But I don't want to worry you.
I would just hear the same thing over and over again.
"Yes I care and I love you. "
Seems like that's all I ever hear I need proof.
I know you try lance, and u normally suceed
but with you in Florida for break
I just don't know what to do with myself.

I admit this is pathetic
And I apologize to whom ever reads this

© 2010 watch_the_world


Author's Note

watch_the_world
Written on iPod so it's real shitty sorry

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I like the poem:) You did a great job getting your emotions out!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Do not apologize for your feelings, they are yours and they are valid. sometimes when we feel unloved, the problem is we are not happy with ourselves Been there, done that.
Know that I do care and will answer any time you want to send an inbox. Sometimes, someone to listen can really help.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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all that matters is that you love yourself..and that is something you need to work on ..you are important, because your here..life gives you importance..

Posted 13 Years Ago


If you actually mean any of this, it's very untrue.
I care.
Maybe because I adore your writing, but still, it's still caring :3
If you ever want to talk I'm here (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nothing pathetic at all about feeling. Very emotional piece here, and very easy to relate. Those select few that care are the keepers. :) feel better

Posted 13 Years Ago


Manda Panda, I loves you. You can always talk to me, you know that.

Great poem, know the feeling all too well. Hmmm...I does not know what else to say. :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. not at all ... (and i write in my phone :P) ... i think this is an incredibly moving and poetic piece ... i suffer from the same ... and writing poetry has really helped ... because now i have precious poetic friends ... and they're always there to ask me how i'm doing ... and i wish that you find precious friends too ... :) ...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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