Speak
A Poem by
watch_the_world
Speak until
you can
no longer
breathe.
Speak your
mind freely,
like
no one
is listening.
Speak truthfully
for
there's
no friendship
within liars.
Speak like
no
one has
hurt you.
Speak with
confidence, without
insecurities.
Speak like
nothing's
holding
you down.
Speak every
word
you
truly mean.
Speak with
your
back
to the
lies and
seek the
truth.
© 2011 watch_the_world
Reviews
Really good poetry! I love the layout.
The words in this poem is "bright" and makes me feel like your talking to me. I love it :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
OMG - this is amazing - wow; i am glad you found me - Amanda; this is very empowering and i love what you did with the layout - its two pieces in one complimenting each other...
Posted 14 Years Ago
OMG - this is amazing - wow; i am glad you found me - Amanda; this is very empowering and i love what you did with the layout - its two pieces in one complimenting each other...
Very interesting format!
I also like this.
Excellent job. ^.^
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very interesting format!
I also like this.
Excellent job. ^.^
Like the way it was formatted! And it's also very interesting... so keep up the good work, really enjoyed the poem. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Like the way it was formatted! And it's also very interesting... so keep up the good work, really enjoyed the poem. :)
This is awesome! The message is beautiful and strong! I really like the line : speak like no one has hurt you.
Brilliant
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is awesome! The message is beautiful and strong! I really like the line : speak like no one has hurt you.
Brilliant
like the message here - speaking your mind..with truth...is always the right way...knowing when to shut up is also important..
Posted 14 Years Ago
like the message here - speaking your mind..with truth...is always the right way...knowing when to shut up is also important..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The form is very interesting, I like this, it speaks to most people in a very fundamental way.
Posted 14 Years Ago
The form is very interesting, I like this, it speaks to most people in a very fundamental way.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
More punctuation. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
More punctuation. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
read (between) the lines.
Spectacular write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
read (between) the lines.
Spectacular write.
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Added on November 20, 2010
Last Updated on July 1, 2011
Author
watch_the_world France
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Hi my name is Rhylen.
A lot of my writing is from when I was really young (like 14) aha so SORRY IF IT SUCKS :)
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