Speak
A Poem by
watch_the_world
Speak until
you can
no longer
breathe.
Speak your
mind freely,
like
no one
is listening.
Speak truthfully
for
there's
no friendship
within liars.
Speak like
no
one has
hurt you.
Speak with
confidence, without
insecurities.
Speak like
nothing's
holding
you down.
Speak every
word
you
truly mean.
Speak with
your
back
to the
lies and
seek the
truth.
© 2011 watch_the_world
Reviews
obviously words are simple but your format makes it effective. thumbs up for that
Posted 12 Years Ago
very nice, and nice structure, i like how you wrote this
Posted 13 Years Ago
very nice, and nice structure, i like how you wrote this
A nice play on structure, although i felt the theme is getting weary.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A nice play on structure, although i felt the theme is getting weary.
Speak as if it were your last words.
:) This is good stuff.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Speak as if it were your last words.
:) This is good stuff.
This is awesome
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is awesome
I really enjoyed this poem, not because of it's content, but because of it's structure. Although I've already said thanks to you, I just wanna give you a good review thanking you for helping me with the structure of my best poem I've written in a while. :P. Anyways, I remember the first time I read this, and didn't give a review for some awkward reason. Anyways, Kudos to you!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I really enjoyed this poem, not because of it's content, but because of it's structure. Although I've already said thanks to you, I just wanna give you a good review thanking you for helping me with the structure of my best poem I've written in a while. :P. Anyways, I remember the first time I read this, and didn't give a review for some awkward reason. Anyways, Kudos to you!
great poem!
very creative!
Posted 13 Years Ago
great poem!
very creative!
great one...
Posted 13 Years Ago
great one...
I like the structure, almost a coded message within the poem. The message itself was so positive and uplifting it was almost spiritual. loved it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like the structure, almost a coded message within the poem. The message itself was so positive and uplifting it was almost spiritual. loved it!
first off, I think the unique format was a nice approach. Lastly, I like the poem because it applies to certain areas of my life. The poem convinces the reader that there is no barrier on speech and the power of thought. The poem also signals that speech should be from the heart and so therefore should always be spoken with assurance...We Shall Always Seek The Truth...
Posted 13 Years Ago
first off, I think the unique format was a nice approach. Lastly, I like the poem because it applies to certain areas of my life. The poem convinces the reader that there is no barrier on speech and the power of thought. The poem also signals that speech should be from the heart and so therefore should always be spoken with assurance...We Shall Always Seek The Truth...
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Added on November 20, 2010
Last Updated on July 1, 2011
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watch_the_world France
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Hi my name is Rhylen.
A lot of my writing is from when I was really young (like 14) aha so SORRY IF IT SUCKS :)
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