you took my emotions

you took my emotions

A Poem by watch_the_world

You took away my emotions,
I don't have happiness,
I don't have sadness,
I don't have excitement,
I don't have guilt,
I don't have empathy,
I don't have sympathy.
You are taking away my life,

I know you're there even though
I'm not diagnosed,

I can feel you inside of me,
eating away at me.
I wish you would stop.

I wish I could tell someone about you,
maybe then I could get help,
I'm willing to try anything.

You have taken everything but anger,
I want my life back,
Get the hell out of my head.

© 2010 watch_the_world


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Hm.. it's very interesting to read. Bravo.. and emotionless pain.... = haha wonderful job! Well done! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is REALLY good. I know how it feels sometimes.

Posted 14 Years Ago


An accurate description of one of the stages of grief, in the anger stage, that is usually the only emotion you feel. Good work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love dis panda :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very good poem. I really liked it. I feel like this too, but not because of anything anyone has done though...I always feel like this though...thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it. I like the formatting in beginning where you list all the emotions that are gone. It's very nicely written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's great, I can really feel the emotion behind this poem. You should keep on writing. :)

- Sookie -


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hi my name is Rhylen. A lot of my writing is from when I was really young (like 14) aha so SORRY IF IT SUCKS :) more..

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