its been a long time.

its been a long time.

A Poem by watch_the_world

I can honestly say
I can't believe
it has been so long
without you.

I can honestly say
I can't believe
it has been so long
since I've done something
incredibly stupid.

I can honestly say
I can't believe
it has been so long
since I let my feelings
get the best of me.

I can honestly say
I can't believe
it has been so long
since my world came
crashing down.

I can honestly say
I can't believe
it has been so long
since you came
and left.

I can honestly say
I can't believe
you have stayed
in my life,
even when you got
angrier than a momma bear
and with her cubs.

I can honestly say
I don't believe you
when you say that
I am everything you've
ever wanted,
that I am
perfection.

I can honestly say
I would much rather
have the truth
than lies,
even if it tears me
apart inside.

© 2010 watch_the_world


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Deep, yet made me laugh with this part:

"Angrier than a momma bear."

I dunno, I just imagined it. LOL, great job though,

Posted 13 Years Ago


The feelings are common, I guess everyone's felt this way before. Fantastic job! Really kept me reading!
"I can honestly say
I would much rather
have the truth
Than lies"
SOO true... me too! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS POEM

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this poem. I can relate to it as of right now...thanks for sharing...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 11, 2010
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