If I were.

poem I wrote in the middle of 8th grade.

If I were a sound,

I'd be the laughter of children.

If I were a smell,

I'd be the sweet aroma of fall.

If I were a surface to touch,

I'd be concrete, rough around the edges but serves a meaningful purpose.

If I were a taste,

I'd be caramel, after a while it just melts.

If I were a color

I'd be purple, a little dark but a beautiful color deep down.

Reviews

[Gabby]

this is ah-mazing@!

[Inci]

beautiful...lively, interesting......nice poem

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This one is amazing. I think it was awesome. I think I can agree with most, but the color would be black. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Shin]

This one is very creative, it's a great poem, I lol'd at the this part:

If I were a taste,
I'd be caramel, after a while it just melts.

Sweet candy, XP

[Liz-z]

So, amazingly creative, and adorable! I love it! The way you become something happy and helpful. It's an amazing poem. ^.^
Favorite Lines would have to be:
"If I were a sound,
I'd be the laughter of children"
What an amazing sound to choose from. Amazing.

"If I were a color
I'd be purple, a little dark but a beautiful color deep down"
So incredibly true! It's one reason why I love the color purple so much. It has a dark but beautiful side to it. Amazing writing! :)

[Leanne Conway]

Awe, I love this poem, It's sweet and beautiful =)

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...a very pretty-colorful poem-
i love all the metaphors great imagery!!!
...sweet-aromatic-delicious poetry....

james:-)