strange feelings

These emotions, feelings, consuming my brain are overwhelming.
I cant think straight,
I cant concentrate.
I think I'm going insane.

I'm starting to like new things,
develop new habits.

Maybe this is a good thing,
maybe its a bad thing.

I find myself confused, unsure of my actions.
Hesitant.

Is this growing up?
If this is, stop me before I lose everything
that ever meant something to me.

Take my hand before I slip too far.

Reviews

[Shin]

Sometimes growing up really hits hard, specially if you saw Toy Story 3 at the ages around 18 - 22, I shed a manly tear... anyways, I liked your poem, very dramatic.

[Jami Nicole]

OH MY GOSH AMANDA I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. IT SOUNDS MORE LIKE SONG LYRICS!!! OH MY GOSH WE SHOULD TURN IT INTO A SONG OR SOMETHING LATER.

I'M USING CAPS BECAUSE I'M REALLY FREAKING HYPER. ANNE SLEPT OVER LAST NIGHT AND SHE BROUGHT THE STUFF SHE HAD AT YOUR PARTY.

THIS IS THE LONGEST REVIEW I'VE EVER GIVEN SOMEONE EVEN THOUGH IT IS TOTALLY RANDOM.

I SHOULD WRITE A POEM ABOUT YOU AND OTHER PEOPLE THAT WE KNOW. THAT WOULD BE SUPER AWESOME.

LOVE, JAMI

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
i kind of liked this piece..
good work..

[Jami Nicole]

Panda this is REALLY good.

Love, Jami.

[.]

"Is this growing up?
If this is, stop me before I lose everything
that ever meant something to me.

Take my hand before I slip too far."

{great poetry--the stress of change
that causes so much anxiety}

james:-)

[Trevor]

I've never been a big fan of poetry, but wow, this is definitely something to read. I think it helps that it's a topic everyone can identify with. I think most people feel this way growing up.

[Leanne Conway]

Wow, This is amazing. Well written. I love it. You're a wonderful writer. =)