I Care For You

It is a Haiku

If I show you how

Much I actually care

Would you stay with me?

Reviews

[EylonBear]

simple sweet and too the point. very good. nice way to show you don't need a long poem to express one's innermost thoughts. I don't know much about Haiku's but i do like it very much. good job.

[N. Scott Cohen]

I actually really, really enjoy this. Often times when we show how much we truly love we are pushed back, something I think we've all experienced. Very fine Haiku.