As I see you, I smile

I see you first, I always do,

 

But when you see me, you smile.

 

You’re always happy to see me,

 

But not as happy as I am to see you.

 

You open your arms to me,

 

And I gladly insert myself between them.

 

I bet you don’t understand

 

Just how much I love you.

 

I know you love me too,

 

To some point at least.

 

My vision blurs,

 

And a single tear falls,

 

As I pull your now still form closer,

 

And let it fall to the ground.

 

I remove the bloodied knife from your back,

 

and watch as red liquid pools around you.

 

But as I look upon you, I smile

 

I can’t help it really, after all, I love you

Author's Note

Probably not my best, but I felt like writing something, and this is what came out.

Reviews

[EylonBear]

the poem itself does sound a little forced but it still flows well. the imagery at the end was great. using colorful adjectives.

[Comatose]

Awww, this made me smile. I love the overall idea for this one, great job ^_^