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mm, i dont know.

Melancholy smiles
that go for miles
hidden by tears
that have lasted for years

 Malignant lies
hidden by benign eyes
happy smiles
are nothing but the Salem Witch Trials

 Her personas fake
her body aches
and she wonders why
she even did this in the first place

Author's Note

Im trying to experiment with poems that can rhyme because i really dont have any that do, this was written late at night when i couldnt sleep, and im not sure if i really know what i meant, anyways i hope you like.

Reviews

[roarke]

fun stuff. Rhyming is hard, if you see it in my poems, it was by accident. lol. When you need to write, write. Whether it's stories, poems, a sentence, a word.... it needs to get out. I think the first and last stanzas have traction. I'd connect them with something different. Keep the middle one and construct something else with that. No waste... lol
Have fun with it.

[Zman135]

Awesome poem! I love you use of vocabulary and your words really paint a picture! Great job! :)

[Steve]

Well done again! You are a good writer. I like how you put things together like a jig saw puzzle......

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Her personas fake
her body aches
and she wonders why
she even did this in the first place"

Kinda speaks to me...I used to think what was my purpose of existence be4...
well not anymore....Thanks to her...

[Sports Girl]

It was nice