For Him

time goes by fast

I loved him to death,

I knew he had a problem, but I accepted it

I knew he had a darkside, but im sure he regrets it

I remember our long talks,

and the days i sat upstairs watching T.V with you

I remember when you would bring me home things from work,

and I felt so special.

I remember when you called me kiddo,

and gave me a hug.

 

I remember when you said you wont be around much longer,

and I refused to believe it.

I remember the day I found out.

I was devastated.

I stayed up all night crying on moms shoulder.

I remember your hugs

I remember your smell

I remember everything

I would do anything to get it back for one day.

 

I love you,

I miss you.

I cant believe its been three years.

You were always there for me

but you're not now, and i have to except that.

- From Me

Author's Note

Its personal, it could be in more detail, but I wrote what came, i was thinking about maybe adding more, but i dont know please review.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your words are full of so much compassion and sadness... if I read this write I am sorry for your loss.

[Ashley]

aww i know what its like to feel alone. its a good poem hun

its hard when people in our life leave you. i really like this one there is really good emotion in it

[Steve]

This one is gripping and so very serious........I am so sorry for you loss. I could feel the emotion in every line....

[Wanderlust]

I can completely relate to this. Ah, :(
Good poem, it just made me remember some things. :P

[Unique Expression]

Hey Brittany, this is both raw and vulnerable, both qualities which make it a powerful read.

I don't think you do need to add any more to it - though you as the writer are the best judge of that. You see I think part of it's strong impact comes from the brevity of it.

[Maurice]

Very genuine emotions expressed here. Nice job.

[Zman135]

Aww :( Written great though, and I didn't see any problems! Great job! =)

[Friks]

In fact it is not something to be measured in eloquence, but in truth-value, it is really something deep and to put it out there is special.

[Friks]

Beautiful! (Might want to put an 'a' before the "hug" ;P) This is actually priceless.