Lost

Lost

A Poem by Brittany W
"

something im going through right now.

"

She looks at an old friend who was once her everything

Time has changed them, made them used to each other

They're able to say anything to each other without being hurt.

They're good friends, and it should stay that way.

 

She looks at an old friend, and she knows she's losing her

The simple things are now getting in the way

She wants to know what happened

But theres no answer

 

She looks at an old friend, and is heartbroken

She asks herself what happened to us,

Arguments are becoming more consistant,

and distance isnt making it any better

 

She looks at an old friend, whose been there forever

She hopes they can make it through

She hopes the distance doesnt make them strangers

She hopes they can have the same friendship

 

She looks at her old friend, and cries

Because she knows theres a chance it might not happen.

© 2010 Brittany W


Author's Note

Brittany W
this isnt my best, i didnt put in my all, i just figured i needed something new so i wrote what came.

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An excuse for its quality is not worth it. ;) I like the very feel of it, natural, spontaneous. It is almost like sitting with you as you speak your mind, your heart, in a creative artistic way. This is pleasurable even though its sad. Good stuff.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You say it wasn't your best, but I like it. I can relate to this completely. The message is strong, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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