10 Fold

These are lyrics I wrote about 6 yrs. ago. Enjoy!!!

 

God won’t save a spoiled soul

Sins burn deeper than Hell’s flame

Twisted mind…of paranoia

Head bowed down in eternal shame

Hateful child, father wasn’t there

Self-absorbed with self-abuse

Sunken eyes…showing weakness

Things been done bear no excuse

 

(Chorus)

Suffer your lies…suffer your losses

Suffer the torment, turned back on you

Suffer your lies…suffer your losses

Suffer the torment…

10 fold…

 

Rotting inside, a slow passing

A fate that is…so deserving

Seeking redemption through false love

Sucking up…to be driven away

Closed eyes, back forever turned

Words drowned down by memories of pain

Save confessions for one who’ll judge

Nothing here…nothing to gain

 

(Chorus)

 

Coming back on you…10 fold (4x)

 

Back on you…10 fold(2x)

 

God won’t save a spoiled soul

Sins burn deeper than Hell’s flame

Twisted mind…of paranoia

Head bowed down in eternal shame

 

Suffer your lies…

Suffer your losses…

Suffer…

Suffer your lies…

Suffer your losses…

Suffer…

Reviews

[Cardinal Robin]

Is this song about Suffering? LOL Just Kidding Mon...I liked this for how focused the message is. Its very straight on. I've been watching some critiques of music artists recently and one of the comments was how the artist would sacrifice meaning for rhyming or sounding good. You have provided the meaning with clarity and force. So now I've got a question...perhaps it's a common one amongst metal fans, "Is this work an example of the genre or is there a component that adds/transcends the current state of the art". Art gives us opportunity to express and to discover. This song is of the express type...can you write darkness with discover?

[Seriana]

Dude, I would SO love to hear these sung. You should record yourself. :)
I love reading things written in the past. Historical my friend, historical.
"Words drowned down by memories of pain
Save confessions for one who'll judge
Nothing here�nothing to gain"
I like those verses...

[Jessica M.]

"Self-absorbed with self-abuse"
Such a reality of masochism.
Nice lyrics, they flow well.