NATIVE OUTLAWS

I want to build a house of freedom,
blessed by Luck,
a wild daughter of Venus

Taller than Olympus,
stronger than Egyptian fate,
a dock for the ancient ark

That house could be my true home,
without walls & ceilings,
vast enough to take all of the love that is hiding

Among the flowers on the hill,
the secret fires shall live,
planning a cosmic murder, without any fears. 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Really vivid...I'm a huge fan of Jim Morrison's music and his poetry...you really did his art form to the t...Thank you for sharing.

[WarriorElectric]

Thank you! I absolutely adore Jim Morrison's dark lyrics and poetry as well, he's always been an endless inspiration to me and a lot of my poems are actually secretly dedicated to him, I'm glad you noticed it :)

[Everett DeValle]

You are most welcome...I have been playing catch up...he was a visionary in his own right, drug induced or not...I loved how he flowed, even the cryptic metaphors...you did an awesome job by carrying his legacy of writing style.

[WarriorElectric]

I agree, he was truly a lyrical genius. Thank again, I appreciate it!

[Everett DeValle]

Actually, I appreciate you...you have some awesome poetry...it reminded me of my college days reading his book and smoking cigarettes...I dream to write visuals like him, however, in my own voice and style. :)

[WarriorElectric]

You're very kind, thank you. I know what you mean, as much as I admire his art, I think it's very important to stay true to yourself... I've always been trying to be candid when it comes to putting an ink to paper :)

[Everett DeValle]

Very true...but don't get me wrong, I love it, I don't want to dissuade you on how your emotions feel and how to convey it in ink, if that's how you feel, that's how you feel...like you, I am admirer of his work...taste in writing is subjective, and it will always be that way. :)

[WarriorElectric]

I know you weren't trying to do that...:) And definitely, pretty much everything is subjective when it comes to humans haha

[Everett DeValle]

Very true, and delightfully so. Thank you, once again, for sharing your poems, to me. I look forward to reading more. :)

[WarriorElectric]

Oh thank you... I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff too...you write really beautifully yourself :)

[Everett DeValle]

Thank you...I'm more enamored with the talent that surrounds me including yourself...nowadays, I really write for me, yet I share them like an open diary...hey that rhymed. :)

[WarriorElectric]

I feel the same way, it's like a diary, only a bit coded and with some metaphors...the best poems are always the ones you write because you feel the urge you need to do it... Hey, you're a poet, you don't know it haha :) xx

[Everett DeValle]

True...most of the time, I'm fatigued, numb, and aimless at time...writing just wakes my spirit up like I unloaded thoughts to move about in my life...it's a reflection of me in moments and times of my life...the work I have up are much darker periods of my life and the introspection of it...but I like reading some of my happier poems of love of my much older work which reminds of a life I had, makes me long for something in the future. :)

[WarriorElectric]

I know, I often think I can only express myself completely in writing. And the fact that it immortalizes some moments of one's life just makes it irresistible :)

[Everett DeValle]

And you have...I enjoy each morsel of words you offered...I bid you adieu, Kind Sir...be well. :)

[WarriorElectric]

Same here. Have a wonderful day, adieu :)
- Ella

[Everett DeValle]

I apologize...I didn't know you were female...I'm just looking at the avatar with assumptions lol sorry tired...but I'm reading. :)

[WarriorElectric]

Hahah it's okay, I didn't put my name anywhere so you couldn't have known... Ciao :)

[Everett DeValle]

Okay, cool, I thought you were gay(not that there's anything with that)...I think that rocks...a female doing Jim Morrison's style. Ciao. :)

[WarriorElectric]

Yeah, I assumed that haha... Thanks once again :)

[Everett DeValle]

I always get hit on, by gay men...I do come from a city that celebrates it...but it flatters me...it must be my big badonka donk booty lol jk

[WarriorElectric]

Haha you're funny :) You're from San Fran? I've always wanted to go there

[Everett DeValle]

Yes, Ma'am...it's a cool city...its really a parking garage city...but people live here for diversity and the nature of it all...and contrary to belief, it's not always sunny here...it's always foggy chilly cold. So if you do go, bring layered clothing. :)

[WarriorElectric]

It sounds lovely :)

[Everett DeValle]

It is in some ways...I'm sure all cities have their own unique and quaint charm. :)

[WarriorElectric]

That's for sure! :)

[Everett DeValle]

Thank you for the conversation, I look forward to having many more. :)

[WarriorElectric]

You're welcome :)) bye for now

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry is amazing. Description allowed me to feel the desire and the hope. I like this destination also. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote