There's One evil that captures and alarms us when we're born, it teaches us to walk in the covers of gentle deaths Almost awaken, we live by looking through somebody else's eyes
Some enjoy their missing books; the lack of knowledge Lost and controlled, our minds are rotten, yet we believe we rule the world
Good luck with the One, we are dancing in our ruins.
Cryptic, metaphorical, and profoundly supercalifragilisticespealidocious. :)
I miss my Jim Morrison book BUT you do it Justice. Kudos.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks, I appreciate it...personally, I'm not very happy with that poem or any of my older stuff for.. read moreThanks, I appreciate it...personally, I'm not very happy with that poem or any of my older stuff for that matter, but I'm glad you liked it :))
Why? It's Effin awesome...I Love how it takes me somewhere. Keep doing it or write other styles or s.. read moreWhy? It's Effin awesome...I Love how it takes me somewhere. Keep doing it or write other styles or subject matter yo break the monotony BUT this style suits you. Yes, a definite I Love it F**k like oops! Freudian slip. :)
A really nice piece. I do feel that we are merely the ploys and pawns of another, at times, and to an extent see the world as that "One" wishes us to see it. It's our duty to learn of this, and break free of that control. Nice write