ONE AND MANY

There's One evil that captures
and alarms us when we're born,
it teaches us to walk in the covers of gentle deaths
Almost awaken,
we live by looking through somebody else's eyes

Some enjoy their missing books;
the lack of knowledge
Lost and controlled,
our minds are rotten,
yet we believe we rule the world

Good luck with the One,
we are dancing in our ruins. 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Cryptic, metaphorical, and profoundly supercalifragilisticespealidocious. :)

I miss my Jim Morrison book BUT you do it Justice. Kudos.

[WarriorElectric]

Thanks, I appreciate it...personally, I'm not very happy with that poem or any of my older stuff for that matter, but I'm glad you liked it :))

[Everett DeValle]

Why? It's Effin awesome...I Love how it takes me somewhere. Keep doing it or write other styles or subject matter yo break the monotony BUT this style suits you. Yes, a definite I Love it F**k like oops! Freudian slip. :)

[WarriorElectric]

Hahah, well f**k it, thanks again :)

[Everett DeValle]

lol F**k Yeah. Welcome again. :)

[X]

A really nice piece. I do feel that we are merely the ploys and pawns of another, at times, and to an extent see the world as that "One" wishes us to see it. It's our duty to learn of this, and break free of that control. Nice write

[WarriorElectric]

I agree. Thank you!

[X]

you are quite welcome