Hurts Like A Short Life

it's about being thankful to God about how you live i imagined and wrote how death would be and the despair that every human has to go through as well hope ya'll like it

Hurts Like The Short Life

Every life is_there is no guarantee whether when
will i die or just to pretend to live on

Wrecked inside by my loved ones
i think its my last night

Stolen every right i stand alone & now
no one can lift my mood

Everything is falling apart...this heart is at fault
its beating faster than usual

A moment of rush,i see him no one's left
to see him except me and and my wish

My body is not in my hands anymore...
i feel like death is decaying my body

I stand here...as my time is frozen...jolt runs through my body
and i fall onto my knees...as my soul is being dripped out...

In an instant my soul is taken from me...my body...
falls heavy like a titan itself...

Has my wish been granted...or...have i been
given a afterlife to watch my pain wash away...

I Scream no one can hear...i punch...i tear my wrath open &
fall to the ground...tear's flowing only to find to my amazement
that even a soul can bleed

A fire running through my veins...i wished my kins could hold me
at least once in their arms...

I see my brothers wailing alongside my parents...
despair has taken over my kingdom i wish i could
take back the time for us...

I could hear angels sing...yet i couldn't see them
the thought of me going fast was wrecking my loved ones...

The youngest of me...he is tearing the world down around him
i wish i could comfort him...it's my darkest day/night yet of my life

"How could you?!!..WHY!!...What have WE EVER DONE TO YOU??!!"
were the words of my family
Alas the seed that was sown in the ground is now a fallen
willow..

"Don't leave me behind take me with you,i don't want to
face the world without you" cried my bride...the pain in her voice
lead even the demons to cry

As they pick me up to deliver me to the ground
i call upon my angels ask them to stop
don't do it
i change my mind stop the suffering...wish i could be reborn from the ashes themselves...

I open my eyes & Here i am writing this Poem =)

Author's Note

heart to heart

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Death is the great mystery. Good not to fear death. It is a part of life. I like your description of the journey and the strong statements in the poem.
"I see my brothers wailing alongside my parents...
despair has taken over my kingdom i wish i could
take back the time for us..."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Humor Me]

i do not fear death in any matter but for those who do i hope they just be getting strong !

[Mockingbird]

we all have to go through travails in our lifetime. but we also have good times to cherish and remember. we shouldn't let the bad times get to us so bad that we just want to end it all. that is not the answer. you should thank god for what you have and ask him to help you get through your darkest hours. great poem.