Smoke of passion

Smoke of passion

A Poem by Humor Me
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something about love

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the smoke of passion
nothing's compared to it

kiss me
hold me close to your soul

every time we are together
the moment freezes

like the stars
meant for moon

wake me up from this mesmerizing
touch of yours

when your body is close to me
it's like the waves crashing against the shore

this love of ours
grows like waterfall

like the blooming of roses in summer
right close to me heart

i am just so addicted to you babe

© 2012 Humor Me


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expresses the bond and intimacy between two people. great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mmmm I know you are;) xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title is perfect, love as a drug eh? I like the concept and again I like that your style isn't too short or too long. enjoyed reading

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet poem of 2 lovers who love eachother in everyway possible, wonderfull write, love how you word it and describe it so creatively! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really really like this, very well written. good job, nice write ( :

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Humor Me
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Abu Dhabi, United Arab Emirates



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