My Last Breath

feeling like the world is cutting itself from me

On a dark and a starry night,beside the willow (tree)
i look upon the sky wondering what secrets could the night hold

the cold breezy night
a chill runs down my spine

as the moon glimmers in the heart of the sky
raining down its silver white light

i see around an question myself
whether its the right path i have chosen upon myself

depths of thoughts playing with my heart
sorrow consumes my eyes as i fall open to fear

heart telling me stop don't do this
the more i think the sore this body gets

a deadly struggle starts within my soul
feeling it's pain was terrifying than death

i talk to myself letting my soul know
that this human knows your suffering

"i can decode you i know you
you are a part of me" and i am just a mere puppet

smiles back and replies..."it hurts to see you coming undone
memory clashes hurt don't they they why live in these shattering dimensions..."

i close my eyes and answer "pain agony suffering i am not able to bear it..."
but love i can....

slowly vision's blurred mind goes shut
heart goes weak it feels...feels like i am dancing with the devil...

as i lay on the ground a one last thought
runs through my mind

will this world ever remember me...friends..anyone..
could they would they ?

i hope so as i draw
My last breath

Author's Note

hope you all like it :)

Reviews

[Lilmissfit]

this is an amazing poem. So very beautiful, its sucks you in and keeps you reading. makes the reader wonder at the cause of the pain, indecision, and sadness. The story hidden behind the emotion filled words. those are my favorite poems, excellent write! i hope to read more like these :) love the setting by the way!! its perfect!

[Hiddenfire]

Was a good read, one quick edit: "i see around an question myself" see should be look. Other than that nothing grammatical that I could find. All in all enjoyed reading it.

[Humor Me]

thank you so much means a lot to me :)