Heaven or Hell

it's about the world going through and i felt to jot it down in this way...

Wicked as the devil, sinful as the omen....dark as the coffin…as Fiery as the inferno…my thoughts chase my dreams away…..

Figure out my cold soul…the pain it holds.....Tear the emptiness inside…fill it with vengeance on the night if eve before flames…..

Unleash the fury of your wings…..you wrath…..your desire…set aside the balance of time…from which we prosper……

Unsheathe your heaven…..release your hell…give us a dose of your medicine…put us to a sleep oh eternal one…for only you can do this…..

Under the eclipse I stand…..sick & weak from my condition…I lose my soul…to the darkness in my heart…..

My Rampage…my Rage…my Rural Flames…my Burning Pride…my undying thirst for Vengeance…all concealed within me…..

Flowing of blood…I walk in shadows…neglecting my will…past brings nightmares…present bring…hidden lies…..

Would not trust anyone…as the phantom comes out to turn me into a stone as fear grips my heart like a dagger has been plunged deep into my wounds….

Damned rises again….once again….lights fade out…who will you turn to….

I hear them say…dying is the only option left….

Author's Note

don't know i had to write dark stuff so i though of something and now here it is !

Reviews

[Humor Me]

thank you !!!

[Hiddenfire]

Ok the opening lines are pretty cool: "My thoughts chase my dreams away..." Amazing line. From then on I was hooked, the poem over all wasn't my cup of tea generally but I couldn't help but like it.