Secrets

Secrets

A Poem by Humor Me
"

a little bit of what i know

"
i have a habit of going to the sea
talking...talking to it...weird does it make me look weird?!

as the new moon rises in the sky
with the stars connecting to tell me their story..

i reach out and listen for what they have to say..
i try to understand but i just cannot decode what they say..

so i tell them my story of the day..
i tell them every secret of mine..till i fulfill my heart of bliss..

a wise friend of mine said 'this sea is just out there resting'
'and it hears from us our secrets'

i agreed...not only was i telling the secrets to the moon
or the stars best of all it was the sea right in front of me

i really didn't know i had caught the attention of such audience
and i am glad i did...

but the secrets....

© 2012 Humor Me


Author's Note

Humor Me
this is my way of looking at things...:)

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Sounds good! It caught the attention of mine into the piece! Your words're very poetic and Me too even feel to believe on your secrets because the world's already filled with lies and crime and bad ones so, I think, this's one of the best way to share the secrets, the talks, the loneliness, the happiness n everything with an ocean and stars and so on because in the world, no one hears you but stars, an ocean, wind, sand and so on'd of course hear you and your inner feelings of the heart!

What a marvelous piece, I read throughout the day!
Keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Humor Me

10 Years Ago

thank you you finally understood what i was trying to say!! :D



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Sounds good! It caught the attention of mine into the piece! Your words're very poetic and Me too even feel to believe on your secrets because the world's already filled with lies and crime and bad ones so, I think, this's one of the best way to share the secrets, the talks, the loneliness, the happiness n everything with an ocean and stars and so on because in the world, no one hears you but stars, an ocean, wind, sand and so on'd of course hear you and your inner feelings of the heart!

What a marvelous piece, I read throughout the day!
Keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Humor Me

10 Years Ago

thank you you finally understood what i was trying to say!! :D
lovely imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I done the same thing. Talks to the stars and moon many times. My problem was I was joined by more folks. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Abu Dhabi, United Arab Emirates



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