The Writer

Once upon a wrtiter was here

Who like to be hear and hear

To him evrything was more near and dear

Te wanted to be dear

Whom none will fear.

Author's Note

what do u Think? it was an instant.

Reviews

[Keith]

This looks like a piece of stream of conscience writing. Where you just laid your hands on the keyboard and transcribed your thoughts. So I can't connect with what you are saying here.

There are typos on every line except the last. And I assume English is not your first language.

I get the feel that you have the mind of a writer. You just need to work on making your words tell your story so that a reader can become drawn in.