Changes

Everyday's a new wave of emotion

every moment a new distortion

thriving from all that we see

 

Never try to hold onto the present

or you will feel resentment

towards what is and what will be

 

Have you ever caught a glimpse

past a lovers sky of intent

at a storm brewing on the horizon?

 

Sometimes we freeze feeling weak

like there's nothing left to seek

that will break the icy comfort

 

Be strong with every breath

every place you chance to step

brings miracles yet to be seen

Reviews

[Bridger Hall]

Have you ever caught a glimpse
past a lovers sky of intent
at a storm brewing on the horizon?

hey this is way good! i loved reading it. these were my favorite lines. you have inspired me to write a poem about a captain on a ship. just from saying storm and horizon. haha. wierd how that works. :) i can´t wait to read more of your writing. glad that i found you. bye.

[An owl on the moon]

You seem to sweep us over the world.. through painful emotions and beautiful glimpses of what hope lies ahead. Life is not an easy course, yet you help give us the vision we need to keep walking with each new day!

[Steve]

Well done! This sounds like you are a professional.

[sammyj]

Very thought provoking. Things to comtemplate. I like it.