A life without living

How lonely one feels

In a world of nonsense

In a reality so fatal

So unforgiving

How worthless one is

In  a sea of blinded souls

That drag and drown one

Into obscurity

How lost one becomes

While tossed and beaten

By waves that never cease

For one to rise up

How one forgets air

And pleasures of existence

For this is not living

This is limbo

Reviews

[Mica]

This is so beautiful - that image of limbo you so eloquently describe as the never ceasing waves of a sea of blinded souls is very striking, and fits amazingly into Inception's version of limbo.

If I could give this 200 points out of 100 for a rating, I totally would.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

That it is, limbo. Time to wake these people up! Excellent read and write!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, this was very beautiful, and very true as well. This world has changed in many ways. It's not how it was years and years ago. Places and people have changed. To me, it's gotten worse. The world is so full of hate, and it has become so shallow. Hearts are brokened; some without recovery. It's hostile out there, and the life we've planned out for ourselves has no direction because of it, I think. This was very beautifully done tho, i totally love it!! :D