Let me go

Curl up
Let the petals crimp
The soft, supple petals

The fumes welling into the vents,
Occupy your lungs.

Release.
Please
Take a deep breath

Don’t let me go..
Till death do us part,

They fall piece by piece

You fall in one.

Reviews

[Alao Taiwo]

nice. the words are kind of scattered but the content is rich.
Again, mind the identity of the voice that's communicating