Owl

Crunch

I've readied for my treat

Sneak

I'm alert,on my feet

Attack

Not slow, nor fast, 

Just right

Grasp

Squeeze

Watch

The eyes drain

Almost done,

Nearly there,

I'm ready to conquer again.

Author's Note

I greatly appreciate everybody's feedback. I truly thought at first I would get a lot of negativity. I was wrong! Thank you all. As always, give feedback (:

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Oh yeah, the simple ways of the owl. Great job!

[K]

I like how it is short and snappy

[Alao Taiwo]

wow. good job. your style is in the 'next level'. not the traditional motive of just pouring out wishes, love sick syndrome etc. welcome