Consumed

Consumed

A Poem by saoirse
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A poem about being consumed by your own emotions , the lengths they take you to.

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Waves thundering up so high
towering above me 
as I let out a cry,
Swallowing me whole
A mist of blue and black
Blurring my sight
Starting to feel so light,
This is over
This is it 
letting out a sigh
closing my eyes
I won't be waking up,
From these lullabies

© 2015 saoirse


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Beautiful and inspiring, you have a good grasp on visual imagery. Well done!

~Rob~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Powerful and emotion filled write. The darkest place we can be is in our own head. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


saoirse

9 Years Ago

thank you for your comment !:)
alifeacoustic

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
How fierce and hungry are your waves... your thoughts confess such a dark, haunting pain flowing over you... through you... pulling you under the tide... So powerful... (Was just watching Song of the Sea about a girl named Saoirse, so when I saw your name, it only seemed right to read your words...)

Posted 9 Years Ago


saoirse

9 Years Ago

Thank you , Ive never seen that movie , I must watch it ^^ thanks for reading !

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Added on January 31, 2015
Last Updated on January 31, 2015
Tags: depression, death, nature, light, struggles

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saoirse
saoirse

Dublin, Ireland, Ireland



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Hi. Im saoirse. Im 17. Just anti social teen . Writing junkie To escape reality. Geek and self confessed hippie. nature . Darkness. Ranter. Please read. more..

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