Cant stop the rain and cant stop the mad

"Be calm. Be calm. Be calm."
Its what you want,
so its what i most do.
With weather,
you can't stop the rain.
You can't help,
A snow storm from blowing.
You can't,
Turn the sun off when it gets to hot.
So what makes you think,
if im loud i can change,
And when im mad its hard to stop,
But I'll do what i can,
i'll stop being...
myself.

Reviews

[chibaby]

this is realy good i feel the same way some times keep up the ggd work, please reviewe my work ,im new thx

[Amanda Marie]

I really like the rawness of this poem...it has an underlined desperation that definitely touched me.