Water World

Water World

A Story by Stella

My hair flying around like there was nothing that could stop it from flying off my head. My body so light with this new world all around me.

"How much longer do you want to be in the pool?" said Jude. I didn't want to left the pool. It was a new world that I wanted to see. I wanted to be around of the water for as long as I would be in this world.

"I guess I'll get out now." I said. I didn't want to leave but i knew Jude didn't want to be here anymore. He had better things to do. I dried off as best as I could and we left the pool. It had been one of those days where being in the water was warmer then being outside. The air on my shin was so cold I started to look a little blue.

"Can we just go back to your place? My moms being a b***h and I don't really feel like going home right now." His mom wasn't always that nice to be around. If she wasn't in a good mood no one is. 

"My house isn't that much better. But i understand what your mom is like so, thats fine." i said. I really just wanted to go home and take a bath but i knew that wasn't going to happen for a few more hrs. So for the next 5 hrs or so i was going to smell like the outdoor pool thats just by my place. On the walk over to my place we didn't really talk. I guess he had alot of his mind. I mean i did. I needed to break up with him. It wasn't working out and I needed to end it tonight. He just wanted the right guy for me. But it was really bugging me that i didn't have any idea what was going on in his head. He doesn't always tell me everything but to no theres something bugging him and I don't no what it is just kills me sometimes.

"You okay?" I asked. Hope maybe he would tell me whats going on for once without me guessing.

"NOTHING is worng." he said. Well.. yelled. I knew if I said anything more he would probably start walking home so.. I wanted to make him happy for a little and I would break up with him. "You want anything to eat when we get to my place? I'd be more then happy to make you anything you wanted." I said with a smile on my face. Hoping maybe just a little it might put a smile on his face.

"No i'm fine. Don't worry about me okay?" He said in a more small vocie this time."Lets just go and watch a movie. Can we cuddle for a little?" He asked looking right at my face as we walked.

"Sure. I don't see why not. As long as you don't mind the pool smell." i said as a joke. But i was never really good at making jokes. As we walked up to my house we still didn't talk. "Would you like something to drink?" I knew I was because I had been working out when I was swiming. It's kind of funny, you swim in this big thing full of water but you can't drink any of it. He didn't say anything so i just got a glass for myself. "What movie are we going to watch tonight?" I asked hoping he would just pick a movie, i could end this and he would leave so i could have my bath, alone in peace. He got up and he walked over to the movies and he picked out "Land of the dead". "Could you just tell me whats on your mind?" I said as the movie was starting.

"Nothing is wrong. I just have alot on my mind and I don't no what to do about any of it." He said as he crossed his arms so he wouldn't get close to me. "Just watch the movie and we'll talk. I'm pretty much you have something to tell me." He said without even looking in to my eyes. My mouth just droped open. I was hoping he didn't no i was breaking up wiuth him. The whole movie we both didn't talk or move. I didn't even move to drink my milk. As soon as the movie ended I didn't want to be the first person to talk so I waited. I guess he was thinking the same thing because for 10 mins we both didn't say anything. I knew I had to be the frist one to sat something or we were just going to stay like this for a long time.

"You going to tell me whats on your mind now?" i asked. Waiting for him to yell and tell me it had nothing to do with me and to f**k off about it. 

"I've hear things about what your thinking about doing tonight." he said. he still wouldn't look at me. Not in the eyes anyways. "Breaking up with me huh?" he said. I couldn't think of anything to say. I just moved my head. "Why don't you just do it then?"

"It's not like this is e-z for me."I said.

"You think it's e-z for me? God... Mel. Do you even have a brain sometimes?" he said. He could up from sitting beside me. "Fine we're over. But thats not the nothing thing that ends tonight." He said. And without even a good-bye he walked out my door. I didn't understand what he meant when he said that but I knew it wasn't the right time to call him and ask. So i went in my bathroom and I started the water for my bath. It had been a long time. As the tube was fulling up with water I sat in the water waiting for it to cover my whole body. As I closed my eyes i pulled my head understand water i hear a door open.

"It must be Dad." I said out loud to myself. As I started to clean my wet body someone was outside the bathroom door. "Dad? Dad, is that you? I'm taking a bath."

"It's not your Dad." Said Jude as he run throw the door. I was pretty sure I locked it.

"What ar..." And before I could even say everything that was going throw my head, my head was being pushed under the water and for real I couldn't get out of the water world I had once always wanted to be apart of. My hair was going all around the water like it was looking for a way out. My body was rolling around the bathtube trying to get Jude off me so I could come back to the real world. Out of no where I could kind of see Jude standing over me. And I had the power to talk, but I wasn't sure I would for long.

"I told you, you breaking up with me wasn't going to be the only thing that ended." And with him saying that my head went under the water. But this time it didn't come back out till the cops pulled my dead body out of the bathtube.

 

 

© 2008 Stella


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Added on June 23, 2008
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Stella
Stella

Winnipeg, Canada



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ive been writing for years. Yes my spelling sucks.. but i feel spelling shouldnt mean anything.. its the meaning behind the writing.. as long as the writing makes you feel something thats all that mat.. more..

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