because i'm a ghost...

its about a ghost... who misses that one who was super special...

"screaming with out a voice,

for i am a lost memory.

crying with out tears

since they have all been long since gone.

whispering 'I miss you' in your ear

for no one can hear me.

saying 'i love you'

because you are the one crying.."

Reviews

[Emily B]

I'm not sure about the quotation marks, the words are remarkable enough that I read them twice . . . could maybe use some spit and polish, still top shelf work

[alexlessah]

i love the story though its pretty short.