In those nights....

In those nights,
I am awake and waiting...
Waiting for something I really want, I really need.
The stars are listening to me and the moon is telling me to have hope.
But, am writing...
writing everything; everything that comes to my mind....but,
I believe in that mighty king who is watching me cry,
watching me fall,
watching me trying to get up...
And tells me to have patience,
cuz' he has something best for me!!

Reviews

[M P Ramesh]

wajiha,

The eternal wait is the strength of the writer and his/her weakness also.
Strive on to overcome is the painful task ahead
Being a member of the CURSED group called poets
you have proved that you can do it

excellent attempt.................


carry on..........

mp

[heartspeaks]

Good one wajiha.....nice to see your work after so long...Well done

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much love....

[Rassoul]

A poem about night, such an amazing piece.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so muchhh.....glad u loved it.

[pragya gaur]

Nice work Wajiha ji....awesome

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear.

[Hari Om]

Ohh even my recent poem is about nights..but this is..amazing ..truely..amzing

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....glad you loved it.

[AcasualPawn]

Nice read..............

Good things comes to those who grab, and leftover to those who wait

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much....

[horizon]

It is beautiful...I too believe in waiting for the things with a positive approach towards what u want..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....

[Priyanshi]

Wow...That's relating and beautifully written...you deserve the best in this world, dear.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...this means alot.

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Zoya]

True. Good things come to those who wait. It'll all be worth it in the end. Nicely penned!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes true....thanks so much deary.

[Zoya]

No worries

[Brent]

The moon and the stars appear brightest at night! Night is also the time that many writers like us feel free to let our minds wander.

I like how you carry hope to push through your challenges. Definitely relatable to any person. In your poem, I'd like to know more about the "mighty king" that you mention. What makes him mighty and how he inspires you.

Inspiring poem.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

well, here mighty king means god.
and he is watching all my movements my feelings and everything i do....so u know he tells me to wait for the best to happen....he has better and best plans for me.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...glad that you loved my work