Heavy Heart..

My heart is heavy....
It's bursting into tears of blood!!
No, dear..
am fine!... There's no trouble.
but, my heart isn't beating.
My feet tremble,
My head aches...
I feel like am tired of walking,
baby, I'd hope you take and carry me in your arms!
Let me walk with you...
Baby, don't leave me alone ever,
Don't leave me behind!

Reviews

[Neeraj]

Well penned ... Such a lovely stuff

[sabinn]

loved the honest flow of feelings beautifully written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and powerful use of words and thoughts.
"Let me walk with you...
Baby, don't leave me alone ever,
Don't leave me behind!"
The above lines , we will ask often in a life. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Accalia]

Such a deep, emotional poem. I personally connected with this piece, it gave me goosebumps while reading this..knowing all to well the feeling of fear of being left behind. This is a amazing! please keep up the good work.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

This is so deep and emotional.Hope so you recover soon

[Donicca Dona L]

a piece of your heart shared with us.
beautiful written .
you are not alone never.
keep it up girl :)

[pia]

loved the depth and lyrical feel in this one
great work

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much love....

[Rassoul]

Emotional and well written piece, I loved it.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you Omar...

[Abraham George]

emotions are flooding through your words

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much dear.

[Jiya]

Short yet crisp
I loved reading it!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so muchhh❤