Too deep.

The water is too deep,

but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!

Let the waves rise,

Let the tornado arrive,

My life I hope is destined to be bright....

I want to fly;

Fly, irrespective of any breaks..

Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.

Let me turn myself up,

Let me become a star that everyone stares.

If I linger in between, and fall off,

Let me rise, rise again to succeed!

The water is too deep,

but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!!

Reviews

[Zoya]

The poem was filled with inspiration, and the spirit to achieve and succeed in life, no matter what happens...wish everyone was such a determined and committed soul. Well written!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you! thank you!

[Zoya]

My pleasure :)

[Priyanshi]

The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!....
Great lines..it's inspiring poem..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much love....

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Mr.Writer]

A positive, engaging and realistic piece Wajiha!
We need more poems with positivity, and this can be a start! :)
Well done, keep it up :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank u soo much....am glad you loved it...

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :))

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I would say it's inspiring and motivating. I think the whole idea here was to prove your capability of doing something odd and impossible and carving your identity. Beautiful poem!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes, u r ryt....thanks so much.

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice attitude towards life. I truly liked this. The message was very well conveyed.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much.....

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Abraham George]

best inspirational words and you are the star that me stares.
Wonderful words my dear friend.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah...thanks so much Abraham....