Too deep.

The water is too deep,

but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!

Let the waves rise,

Let the tornado arrive,

My life I hope is destined to be bright....

I want to fly;

Fly, irrespective of any breaks..

Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.

Let me turn myself up,

Let me become a star that everyone stares.

If I linger in between, and fall off,

Let me rise, rise again to succeed!

The water is too deep,

but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!!

Reviews

[Anjali]

You just made me feel so empowered! It's so amazing, loved it so so much.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear.....

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares.
If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!
These words boosted me and motivated..one of your best write

[Wajiha Nayeem]

awww...thanks so mch farhan....

[Jiya]

Amazing 😉
Keep writing....

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear...

[Prashant Bajpai]

Very well written clear thoughts

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks friend...

[z.chéri]

I love this! Great message! Keep writing! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you!!!

[zaisham9393]

Beautiful !Thank you for sharing :)!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure...thanks so much.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh yes! That determination in there is working on this poem. Nicely written. :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you dear...!!!.

[AcasualPawn]

The best line that i can pick from it is-

If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!

Well written..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much.....!!

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Your words flow with a beautifully positive message of hope and inspiration, nicely done!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so mch....

[Tony Jordan]

My dog would try to walk on water - he was astounded when he did once (but it was ice) then he fell through !! Hohoho lol

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haahhaa....