Too deep.

The water is too deep,

but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!

Let the waves rise,

Let the tornado arrive,

My life I hope is destined to be bright....

I want to fly;

Fly, irrespective of any breaks..

Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.

Let me turn myself up,

Let me become a star that everyone stares.

If I linger in between, and fall off,

Let me rise, rise again to succeed!

The water is too deep,

but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!!

Reviews

[Accalia]

This is so uplifting, and inspirational I absolutely loved it! This piece in my opinion gives the reader as well as the writer the feeling of: inspiration, peace of mind, and above all hope.

[heartspeaks]

Lets just say...This was something i really really reallllyyyyy needed right now ... Thanks wajiha... Its really motivating and poetically beautiful.. Feels good to read your work after so long.. Loads of love

[Abhishek Asthana]

Love to see you writing these motivational kind of stuff... "when there is a will there's a way"... extremely well written wajiha :)

[The Exiled Wolf]

An encouraging piece! I like how you put difficulties as water - it can be deep, it can be binding, but finally we will walk on it and take flight!

[Suhd]

Daring. Passionate. Liked it :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you suhd.....

[JP142000]

Beautiful

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank youuuu❤❤

[joanna]

babe! u lit it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks bae.....thanks for being here love❤

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

The title itself explains about the poem. A truly deep and motivating poem.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear.....

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the energy and the drive of the words.
"Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares."
I liked the complete poem and the above lines stood out to me. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so muchh...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Jessica Lima]

This is a very realistic but hopeful piece. keep it up!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear.....