If.

If someone loves you truly,

they'll follow you everywhere...

If someone loves you truly,

and then,

You love writing...

then am damn sure they'll become writers anyway.

Reviews

[Accalia]

Great work! I apologize for the late review, but anyway I liked this very much...keep up the good work.

[Donicca Dona L]

You love writing...
then am damn sure they'll become writers anyway
is it said in a ironical way??
cause i got that like that

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes....u got tht right...

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts dear Wajiha. You are right. If someone loved you. They will follow you. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

heheh....thank you soo much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Mustafa]

well, this is damn true Wajeeha damn true

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you...wajiha btw!

[z.chéri]

I think that you should remind people that if someone truly loves them that they should always remain their own person.
Overall, i enjoyed this poem. Some grammar and wording could be fixed but the whole idea is good. :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hey..thanks for the feedback...yah!..that grammar was somewhere gone wrong..i promise u guys u won't see the grammar mistakes going wrong again!

[heartspeaks]

If someone loves you truly,
they'll follow you everywhere,
What you you love the most
Will now become their's,
Every single passion of yours
Is about what they care
And then it turns to be you,
Who madly loves writing,
Eventually your love casts the magic
And they too end up
becoming writer anyways.
Hey wajiha... it your peice was good but it's a little raw...your emotional concept is good and strong and i liked the interesting word you wanted to convey..but not many are getting it...you mean to say is
Theres a one who loves you
But you love writing
So your love makes them writer's as well...that they start to convey their feelings as writing's for you cause thats what you love and all they care about is what you love... I just put few lines moulding it. I hope it helps ...you can put them as it is but i would like you to add few more lines here and there in it...making it a cute visual....i know you can do it. Hope you dont mind my words... keep writing.Hope i was of help

[Wajiha Nayeem]

shukran shukran....i'll make sure i dnt do it the nest time...thanks dear for the concern

[Farhan Shaikh]

Last line is really confusing but i like it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much farhan.

[rowan.taylorrr]

the last two lines are confusing. but the first few lines are good

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahha...ikr they are confusing...well, thanks.

[Surya]

Is it so?.....Does anything happened alike?....anyways I liked it...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes it did...ask kwel bratt

[Wajiha Nayeem]

msg me.......

[Najam Us Saher]

It's true..I feel something is missing.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haha..okay...thank you dear.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

btw wat's missing?

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.
More of reality was missing in this poem. You could have written more about the changes in your life when you love a person.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ohh sure sure..