Holds....

My heart holds beneath,

A million unsaid feelings.....

Reviews

[Suhd]

Good one. Short and pithy !

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much friend..

[duff]

Short but it says a lot. If you can achieve that then well played. Nice job!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much duff.

[duff]

You are so welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

If you add a line in the end which has 5 syllables it will be a perfect haiku. Please think about that. It will be a marvellous work then.
Take every chance you can so that there are no such regrets as 'I should've'
When you take the chance and anything goes wrong you will be happy that you were brave enough and took a chance. There will be no regrets in the future.
There is so much to interpret in these two lines. It is a good thought. I loved it.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much saher for correcting me...thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

No need to mention thanks.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Short but powerful, loved it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear!

[Abraham George]

this is the place where you can pour all your feeling .
we are waiting for that.
Let it flow

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hehe...yes, let it just flow.

[Mr.Writer]

Short words, but very powerful and beautiful, as it holds a whole new story behind it!
Well done, keep it up!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much dear!

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! :)

[Surya]

It's deep dear...I loved it...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you Surya.

[Damien Ridge]

Speaks to me. I have a million unsaid feelings holding me back, holding relationships back... etc. Thanks for sharing, was short and effective!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much Damien....am so happy that you visited here.